FlakiM For me, that depends on the story itself, if it fits in and results in a coherent well- rounded package I might also like a badass main character. Like Paige in this case, I think having her less sarcastic would change the flow. Being obedient isn’t one of Paige’s traits, and it wouldn’t suit her, she likes confrontations too much. And why go the direct line when you can take a detour?
It took a while to get into the story, enter this complex magical world and get used to the writing, I’m glad the author offered some explanations about the most used magical expressions. So far it looks promising and suspenseful. It gets hard to stop reading.
As this is a revised version, I wonder what changes have been made.
